Tuesday, May 03, 2005
comments on "Night Poems" version 2
What to say. What to say. Suddenly I loathe it. But I think that has more to do with other things going on. So I find myself impatient with the poem. I like the first section best. The second section seems phony. The 3rd and 4th sections are OK. They are much like the original versions, just trimmed.
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