This seems to me just fiddling. I was feeling something coming up in version 4. Then Jack offered his collage thingy. And I liked it about as much as anything I'd done. I toyed with his changes. Present tense. Eliminating these words, those words.
Something's gotta come from inside this. If there's anything inside it's gotta bring its body up. I feel like I'm flicking a fishing line across a dark pond. So far I've made some mildly diverting ripples but I've not attracted any living creatures. Time to heave in a stone?
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