Being a compendium of what Glenn Ingersoll is thinking and reading and you know whatever.
Friday, July 04, 2008
comments on “cake the walk”, version four
The stanza I’m closest to excising is the duck one. While I like the way the pond places the baseball diamond in a town park, thus helping prevent the reader from seeing some gigantic sports complex, the duck isn’t doing anything much. Not that he’s gotta exactly. I’m still thinking.