Summer, Fall, Winter
Like Costco toilet paper
Bulk products run low
My husband Kent wrote the occasional poem. In this case it’s the very American version of haiku, the 5-7-5 syllable count what makes it haiku. Kent does refer to the seasons, which is considered another requirement of Japanese haiku. The Japanese want a haiku to evoke the feeling of a particular time of year. Does Kent’s? Perhaps the poem means to evoke winter -- the “bulk products” of nature are abundant in summer, but gradually peter out in fall, winter offering the smallest amounts.
Kent appends a note, “3 season Haiku.” Was that was the challenge? Write a poem that includes three of the four seasons?
Every so often I sort a pile of papers and today I found the haiku on a crumpled square of paper from a logo notepad. It is undated.
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